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Redline 3

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1) Try to bring the bridge of the nose to a curve. (Refer to this image: [link]) Also be sure to shape the chin correctly; add depth to the chin. (The only way to actually understand this is to compare the redline to the original. There's an extra line that connects the chin to the side of the head.

2) The right ear should be showing, even if just a little bit.

3) Avoid excessively long limbs. Cats don't have legs this long, so just try to avoid it. Also, avoid the 'sliding on ice' look with this position. Keep the legs close to each other.

4) The back should slope just a bit, not too much or too far out. This also goes with hindquarters. Keep them close to the body; don't let them slide out too far.

5) Tails shouldn't be all curvy like shown in the original. There are bones in the tail connected onto the spine. Make sure you should curl the tail into an 's' shape.

6) Shape the back legs and paws. Try to avoid the curled look with the front-most back leg. It doesn't seem to be sitting on a flat surface when it's like this.

7) The tummy of the cat should go down to where the back leg's knee/thigh about stops. (Mostly applies to these sitting positions.)

8) Bring the chest out more to avoid the 'neckless' appearance.
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LittleArtistRen-Ren's avatar
Um...
Can I ask if you could redline one of my drawings?